I’m not a kid, ok
I’m not a kid, I say
I’m not a kid.
These words could be heard in the Yr 5 classrooms this week. Why?
Poetry has been our unit of study in Literacy. We have read the poems of Michael Rosen and Valerie Bloom and considered their styles of writing.
Watch Michael Rosen perform his poem
Year 5s, we now look forward to reading your own free verse poems.
The Swimming Pool
ReplyDeleteThere it was the the blue wet thing
People were there in it splashing and swimming
I put one foot in man it was freezing
I know I can swim very well
But what if I fell
In that deep end
There was a bend
That separatde the small pool from the deep
Oh no,I ow meep!
I have sliped I've fell
Suddenly i can't swim so well
Oh but wait theres no nead to fear
Because my dad is here
And now i am sitting there on the side
With nothing to be scared of and i don't nead to hide
This is my poem.
Kate you made a mistake in the word (separated)
DeleteKate, you made a mistake in the word need, you spelt nead, but you wrote a really good poem!
DeleteGalaxy Poem
ReplyDeleteWhen you run into space,
stars fall on your face,
you head back to base,
stay in your place,
jump into another case,
you go back the galaxy,
the milky way falling down on me,
and the whole world come together in peace,
THE GOLDEN CASTLE
ReplyDeletecastle
castle
they are scary
they are enormous
they are golden
very golden
they have enourmus rooms
they have enourmus pools
castle
castle
the Queen lives there
the King lives there
every body lives there
castle
castle
they have lots of funiture
they have lots of couches
they have a library
But they dont have kitches!!!!
done by:sarrah abou taleb
class:5B
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ReplyDeleteFriends
ReplyDeleteOh, friends,
They are so complicated,
You do one thing mean or embarrassing,
That’s what they say,
Don’t talk to me!
2 days later they come back and say,
Hey dude what’s up,
Friends, friends, friends,
Sometimes friends, sometimes enemies!
I would rather stay friend-less,
But then life is boring,
It’s just a joke,
Is my line every day,
Friends, friends, friends so complicated.
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ReplyDeleteGreen Team:
ReplyDeleteGreen team is awesome,
Green team is cool,
Green team will win,
and YOU will lose!
Cheer for us,
and you won't regeret it,
cheer for someone else,
and you will cry about it!
we are the SCORPIONS!
we are the GREEN TEAM!!!
THE MIGHTY GREEN SCORPIONS!!!!!!!
So cheer for us and you won't regret it!!!!
O ya,the (RED FOXES) rules and we will put you into boxes.
DeleteMy TV
ReplyDeleteMy TV is HD, its also as much as 3D.
My TV is Plasma, it also got me asma.
My TV is New, and...and...and...AAACHHOOO!!
My TV is Rusty, and its also dusty.
My TV has a new remote, you can also use an emote.
My TV comes to the bathroom, and I wont ever go to the bedroom.
School day
ReplyDeleteI jump in the pool,
I make the school rule,
Iam so cool,
It is funny but that means money,
that one is cool,
but I go to school,
I know more,
and he goes nuts,
down to his guts,
he is in a bad mood,
and I laugh,
Haaa,
he is gelous like a bee,
but I go free,
for the day,
and for the week.
By paul schnurbusch
DOGS
ReplyDeletedogs dogs ,they are so good
you can play with them,
and sleep with them too.
dogs dogs, they are so friendly
they come in different sizes and colours,
but are always friendly
dogs dogs , they are so cute
you can cuddle them
and say 'you are so cute' .
ReplyDeleteWell done everyone!!!
Birthday Poem
ReplyDeletesometimes when you receive a birthday present
you dont like it
but you try to show the opposite
but you still feel sad because you want another one
when you get another one yuo feel ecstatic
then you see other people that wish to have one
all you do is just feel sorry for them
Farah Al-Najjar
5B
If I had gills
ReplyDeleteIf I had gills
I would evolve into a beautiful rainbow fish
If I had gills
I would be the enormous sea president
If I had gills
I would find pirate treasure
If I had gills
I would be richer than a king
If I had gills
I would kill a whole pile of clumsy jelly fish
CLOWN
ReplyDeleteMr Browan,the circus clown
He is funny and fat
big silly hair and floppy shoes
don't forget the big red hat and cherry nose
along with polka-dot and bright colored clothes
Mr Browan puts his clothes upside down
while walking around inside the town
he does many magic tricks
and making ballons into things
most of all, makes children's laugh
made by bianca 5B
I'm called Lofis lofis is called dofis
ReplyDeleteNo your called Dofis
Fighting together is not fun
When you do it in the sun
Dofis,Lofis,Rofis,Zofis
I want landy
No you want candy
I want lady
No you want daddy
Fighting together is not fun
When you do it in the sun
I want 1d
No you want 2d
Stop being mean
No stop being bean
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ReplyDeleteMohammed Din
ReplyDeleteHAVING PETS
Having pets is horrible
You have to do everything for them
They have germs all over them
Oh pets
Oh pets
So horrible and yucky
I hate to have one
They don’t care about anything
They always do what they want
They think they rule
Oh pets
Oh pets
So horrible and yucky
I hate to have one
Mum look, that puppy is so cute
Can I keep it please?
Look it’s for free
CATS AND DOGS
ReplyDeleteCats are cute
but can be vicious
they have claws
as sharp as swords
Dogs are furry
Dogs are adorable
but have you seen their teeth
as yellow as the sun
Cats and Dogs are still my friends
Good poem sadie :)
DeleteMy Little Brother
ReplyDeleteHe is funny when he is awake,
He is sad when someone shouts,
He is angry when you tease him.
His tongue is so big,
His hair is so short,
His face is so white.
We fight a lot,
We beat each other a lot,
But still I love my brother.
Sahil Amin 5b
MY XBOX
ReplyDeleteI am the king on my Xbox
As no-one can beat me
The big green light appear
And I tumble into a new world
In Halo my brother rules
But in Black Ops I boom
In Fifa 13, Messi is doomed
And at the end, I walk away
With yet another victory
I love your poem nice one
DeleteWHY
ReplyDeleteWhy are there homework mom
Why are there school brother
why do we go to school dad
why do we work in school sister
why do you wake me up so early mom
they all shouted it is for your own good
Oh Teachers!
ReplyDeleteI've been in school once
when I was in year one,
my teacher used to ask me
what is 2+2 and I answered 4.
she said "Are you sure?"
I answered "No, it's 5"
"NOOO" she shouted "It's 4".
OH TEACHERS....
MUNISA SHAMSIEVA 5C
March , March
ReplyDeleteMarch , march
Marching down the lane
March , march
Marching back again .
Clap , clap
Clapping down the lane
Clap , clap
Clapping back again .
Skip , skip
Skipping down the lane
Skip , skip
Skipping back again .
Jump , jump
Jumping down the lane
Jump , jump
Jumping back again .
Hop , hop
Hoping down the lane
Hop , hop
Hoping back again .
Run , run
Running down the lane
Run , run
Running back again .
Jog , jog
Jogging down the lane
Jog ,jog
Jogging back again .
Slide , slide
Sliding down the lane
Slide , slide
Sliding back again .
Skate , skate
Skating down the lane
Skate , skate
Skating back again .
Walk , walk
Walking down the lane
Walk , walk
Walking back again .
Talk , talk
Talking down the lane
Talk , talk
Talking back again .
Listen , listen
Listening down the lane
Listen , listen
Listening back again .
Tap , tap
Tapping down the lane
Tap , tap
Tapping back again .
Hang , hang
Hanging down the lane
Hang , hang
Hanging back again .
By Aastha chaturvedi class 5a
Football Player`s Fame
ReplyDeleteFootball is my favorite game.
shooting the ball throughout the field brought me fame.
Audience were there to watch the game,
passed the ball, shoot and thought Scored,
everyone stared.
No one ever watched a ball rocking a bird.
Left it featherless, i was sweating ,
turned red and full of shame.
Wow everyone's poem are good
ReplyDeleteWeLl DoNe EvErYoNe!
Deleteim the ipad master
ReplyDeleteim the ipad master
thats wat they call me
i never lost on game
ill dare u to a challenge
maybe when your ready
what ever u do
you cant stop me
no one can beat me
i'd like to challenge u right now
but my ipad has no battery
tebyan osman 5B
nice one!!!
ReplyDeleteteachers
ReplyDeletetechers are mean
teachers are kind
teachers can eat children but only sometimes
sometechers have children soup for tea
and they say"yummy this soup is so divian
teachers are horrible
teachers ares smelly
teachers are terrible
theachers are terifing
techers are stricked all the time
tebyan osman (5B)
If I had Gills
ReplyDeleteIf I had gills,
I would search for a golden nugget.
If I had gills,
I would swim in a golden bucket.
If I had gills,
I would find Neptune treasure.
If I had gills,
All my life would be filled with pleasure.
If I had gills,
I would swim all day.
If I had gills,
I would make every fish obey.
If I had gills,
I would fight with the shark.
If I had gills,
I would be the king of the dark.
If I had gills,
I would look very cool.
If I had gills,
I would never be with the fool.
Omar Raslan (5C)
tree house
ReplyDeleteI know where I will go, I will go to my tree house,
I go there at night and I go when it's light.
I know where I will go, I will go to my tree house,
When I have lunch I have rice I don't really like it but I have to say it's nice.
I know where I will go, I wil go to my tree house
One direction
ReplyDeleteLiam really is a payne
maybe he got his tip from zayn
but for now well let niall take the blame
maybe it is from all the blame
but would you think he would have overcame
his faer of spoons oh it really is ashame but hey hi still have a cute name.
oh Zaina thats so sweet of you
DeleteBoys
ReplyDeleteHey yo listen
Boys are great boys arent
Boys eat dates boys dont irritate
Boys play ball and so does paul
Boys like sports so they fall
YO YO YO
boys help a lot and like to share out
BOYS ENJOY JUMPING and playing about
I WAKE TODAY
ReplyDeleteI wake today,
get out of bed,
scratch and yawn,
and pack my bed,
i get a breakfast,
full of fuel,
then pack my bag,
and head to school,
when i arrive,
i'm totally shocked,
the lights are off,
its me not them,
i woke too soon,
its 4 am.
By:Maryam
MY COMPUTER
ReplyDeleteMy computer is 20 inches long
My computer has internet in it
My computer has games in it
My computer is 3D
My computer is black coloured
My computer has so many things in it
My computer is the best
Granny and the fox:
ReplyDeleteA sunny day
children run
children play
children have fun
a granny lives by a river
where its cahlm
and nothig slithers
she whent out to the garden
with soes and socks
but next to her
stood a baby fox
she picked him up
and snuggled tight
but a big storm came
so they whent inside
it was warm
by a fire light
and a few minuts later
the fox had a fright
thefox was hiding
behinde the chair
the granny smiled
and stroke his hair
the next morning
the granny told the fox
with lots of chere
you can stay with me
EVERY YEAR
by Isabelle
kate i liked your poem it was good .
ReplyDeletethank you
your since rly maia 5a
Everyone Poems are really good.
ReplyDeleteGood job everyone
ReplyDeleteDear Year 5's
ReplyDeleteI think you are a very talented lot. Some of your poems are interesting and detailed.
We too in our class this term are studying the poetry genre. However we'll have some up on our blog within a few weeks. I love the Micheal Rosen's rap and will include his rap in my post on poetry too.
You can visit us at 5gspanhills.global2.vic.edu.au
Keep up the good work.
Ms Fernandes
who r u then?
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