Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Opportunist Poetry!


5S used the time while waiting for children to be collected from school with today's early closing to write their own poem in the style of Michael Rosen.

School’s Closing by 5S
 “Oh no!” declared the principal, “school has to close.”
Sherouq mentioned, “Oh no! Extra homework!”
Samar cried, “Oh no!  I don’t want to miss school.”
Haruka complained, “Oh no! I wanted to do our Science lesson.”
Ju Won mumbled, “Oh no!  I’m going to miss art!”
 Saud roared, “Oh no! I’m going to miss my friends!”
Awab exclaimed, “Oh no! We’re all going to die!”
Ayyan uttered, “Oh no! I’m going to be bossed around by my older sister!”
Fay groaned, “Oh no! I’ll be stuck in my house!”
Hala screamed, “Oh no!  That means I have to stay at home with my brother!”
Andy moaned, “Oh no! Too much extra work from Dad!”
Adam added, “Oh no! Geography’s my favourite subject!”
Amin shouted, “Wohoo!”
“Yipee!” cheered Mr. Suter, “now I can have a digestive biscuit in peace!”

9 comments:

  1. This poem rocks!!!!!!!!!!!! It is soooooooooo funny espcialy when Awab said we are all going to die!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. Although we all know Samar that was never going to happen, don't we?

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  3. Of course Mr. Suter I was kidding.

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  4. THIS IS COOL! but why am i not in?

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  5. Cool poem 5S !! it ROCKS!!!!!!

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  6. You'd already left, Humza!

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  7. Huh I couln't write that I can play on my ipod and laptop

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  8. It was so much fun when we did it and i also like the part when Awab said we are all going to die !!!

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  9. cool poem i also like awab saying were going to die !!!!!!

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